10 minutes it took me to leave
9 reasons I didn't need
8 lies you already told
7 sins that took my soul
6 kids I never knew
5 traffik lights I just ran thru
4 miles to my next destination
3 hrs I listened to you explainin
2 reasons why I would never come back
1 is because I'm so much better than that
MzP
Friday, January 11, 2008
Countdown
Posted by MzPoetiK at 2:01 PM
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14 comments:
i love it!
Damn. I see once you began that countdown, it's pretty much over for the man huh?
Good stuff.
PAJ- Thanks gurl!
Don- lol it sure is...Thanks
it's a wrap for the nig...love it!!!
@ Mspoetik
LMAO..not the kool aid!!! you know that was a fight in the house as a kid!!!
love this!
Ten- he out the door lol
Girl I was the only child I HATED makin that shit LOL...I was over protective of it like nah drink water lol...a mess :)
EB- Thanks and Welcome :)
@ Ms Poetik
Girl I had to do my best "Devil Wears Prada" Miranda voice...
lol..girl we can get them made together and strut down the street lol
LUV'd it!!!! Now THAT is walkin' papers!
I like this. cleverly written. Keep Doing It.
Thanks for stopping by mines too.
The Star
Nice poem. Imma use that technique for the next guy who F***s up! ;) lol
that sounded like the countdown to happiness to me
u was dealing with all that bs but by the time u got to pne ur problems subsided
V- Thanks gurl!
Cease- Thanks for stoppin thru
Erica- lol Thanks
D- You kinda right!
Oh i love this! Straight and to the point!
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