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Friday, January 11, 2008

Countdown

10 minutes it took me to leave
9 reasons I didn't need
8 lies you already told
7 sins that took my soul
6 kids I never knew
5 traffik lights I just ran thru
4 miles to my next destination
3 hrs I listened to you explainin
2 reasons why I would never come back
1 is because I'm so much better than that

MzP

14 comments:

Still Patrice said...

i love it!

Don said...

Damn. I see once you began that countdown, it's pretty much over for the man huh?

Good stuff.

MzPoetiK said...

PAJ- Thanks gurl!

Don- lol it sure is...Thanks

Tenacious said...

it's a wrap for the nig...love it!!!

@ Mspoetik

LMAO..not the kool aid!!! you know that was a fight in the house as a kid!!!

Eb the Celeb said...

love this!

MzPoetiK said...

Ten- he out the door lol

Girl I was the only child I HATED makin that shit LOL...I was over protective of it like nah drink water lol...a mess :)

EB- Thanks and Welcome :)

Tenacious said...

@ Ms Poetik

Girl I had to do my best "Devil Wears Prada" Miranda voice...

lol..girl we can get them made together and strut down the street lol

Virtuous said...

LUV'd it!!!! Now THAT is walkin' papers!

who? said...

I like this. cleverly written. Keep Doing It.

Thanks for stopping by mines too.

The Star

Erica said...

Nice poem. Imma use that technique for the next guy who F***s up! ;) lol

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D. McFadden said...

that sounded like the countdown to happiness to me

u was dealing with all that bs but by the time u got to pne ur problems subsided

MzPoetiK said...

V- Thanks gurl!

Cease- Thanks for stoppin thru

Erica- lol Thanks

D- You kinda right!

Mizrepresent said...

Oh i love this! Straight and to the point!